Writing: Planning Versus Winging It

One of the most contentious issues among fiction writers is the debate over whether it’s better to plan your stories ahead of time, having everything laid out before the first word is typed, or to fly by the seat of your pants, reveling in the joy of creation.

writingAsk ten writers for their opinions on this, and you will get at least eleven answers. I’ve seen detailed breakdowns on how a failure to plan ahead is nothing but a recipe for writers’ block, sloppy stories, and failure. I’ve also seen people argue that meticulously planning ahead robs you of your freedom as a writer, turning you into a machine that churns out work without inspiration.

For my part, I have a very unorthodox take on the issue:

I think both can work.

You see, I’ve used both methods extensively over the years. When I first started, I planned every story in detail before sitting down to write it. I’d write out a lengthy timeline featuring every single scene. I’d then agonize over this road map to make sure everything fit together well and that I hadn’t missed anything important.

This had a lot of advantages. Planning a story ahead makes writers’ block much less of a problem. Every time you sit down to write, you know what lies ahead. You’ve just got to put the words on paper.

It’s also a great source of confidence to a growing writer, to know that you’ve got a pre-planned plot to keep referring back to. When you have a map handy, you’re much less likely to get lost.

For this reason, I recommend writers who are just beginning plan ahead. I wouldn’t consider winging it until you become more comfortable in your craft.

Cover art for "Rage of the Old Gods, the First Book of the World Spectrum" by Tyler F.M. EdwardsBut at the same time, it did make writing feel like a chore. A lot of the fun of writing* is developing the story and watching the plot unfold. Just as when reading, you want to see what happens next.

*(PSA: Writing is rarely fun. Don’t become a writer if you want to have fun. The rarity of fun in writing is what makes it worth preserving.)

Planning ahead robs you of this. And while I don’t believe in writing for purely for one’s own amusement, I do think it’s important to be able to take at least some level of pleasure in your writing. When you’re enjoying yourself, your passion infuses and enriches your work. It inspires you to new levels of creativity.

Furthermore, if writing feels like a chore, that makes it much harder to get motivated to write, and for a lot of people, that’s an uphill battle at the best of times. You don’t want to do anything to damage your own motivation.

On the other hand, writing without a detailed plan makes the art of story-telling more of an adventure. You’re as eager to find out what happens next as your readers will (hopefully) be. You want to keep writing. You want to know what surprises your characters have in store for you.

It opens you up to sudden flashes of inspiration, as well. I find that writing with a plan makes me work rather mechanically, and I’m less likely to have sudden ideas for interesting twists or powerful scenes.

Barria, the known worldHolding an entire story in your mind can be taxing, as well. If you’re not juggling the entirety of a plot at all times, I find one’s mind is better able to focus on the task at hand, and you can put more effort and thought into each individual scene. When you focus less on the big picture, the details come alive.

Of course, it also has downsides. When you have no plan, sometimes things just ramble and never amount to anything worth reading. You can paint yourself into a corner and have no idea where to take the plot. You leave yourself more vulnerable to being side-lined by writers’ block.

In some extreme cases, I’ve had to abandon major projects because I planned ahead so poorly that the story just fizzled out halfway through.

My World Spectrum novels really taught me a lot about the pros and cons of planning versus winging it.

The original novella that started it, The Forgotten Gods (now the first section of Rage of the Old Gods), was meticulously planned as was my way at the time. It was a bigger story than I’d ever written before, and I don’t think I could have managed it in my nascent creative state without such planning.

But when I revisited the story several months later, it was an act of desperation for lack of any better ideas of what to write. I didn’t want to commit to anything, so for the first time, I didn’t plan far ahead. I let my creativity run free, and the story evolved organically.

Cover art for "Children of the Gods, the Second Book of the World Spectrum"This was very important. It allowed me to write without burning myself out by trying to plan vastly far ahead. It allowed me to focus on telling a good story without worrying about what the final outcome would be.

The prospect of writing an entire book was at that time incredibly intimidating. If I’d planned ahead and set out to write a novel, I think my courage would have failed me, and I never would have accomplished anything. I just told the story I wanted to tell, and it became a novel.

That was to set the standard for much of my future writing works, especially the World Spectrum series. The World Spectrum shows both the good and the bad of winging it.

I’ve talked before about how I never really had a plan for certain characters, most notably Doga, and unfortunately, I think it shows. For much of the books, Doga is just sort of there. He doesn’t do much, and his character arc is almost nonexistent. I think some elements of the plot, especially in book one, can also be a bit rambling at times due to my scattered flights of fancy.

But on the other hand, the very existence of the books is owed to letting my creativity take wing, as are many of their finest moments. I’ve very proud of Prince Tyrom’s character and how his story evolved, and virtually all of it was the result of making it up as I go along. Similarly, all of the events of Children of the Gods that formed the groundwork for Human Again were things I came up with in the process of writing the book.

There’s not too much I can talk about without getting into major spoilers territory, but suffice it to say that if you’ve tried the World Spectrum books (And why haven’t you? It’s free!), pretty much any major plot event you’ve enjoyed was something that grew organically while I was writing.

Cover art for Human Again, the Third Book of the World SpectrumI suppose I should clarify that even when I have thrown caution to the wind, I’ve never flown by the seat of my pants to the extent that I was making up the plot one sentence at a time as I was writing it, and I’m not sure I would recommend trying that. I’ve always had a plan for whatever scene I’m writing, even if a vague one and even if I have no plans for after that scene.

These days, I like to do a little of both techniques. I’ll have a broad plan of the plot for each book/story/section/character, but I’ll leave much of the space in between blank and fill it out as I write. I may have a destination in mind, but the journey there is something that evolves while writing.

For me, this seems to bring the best of both worlds. My ideas are loose enough to allow for experimentation, there’s plenty of room for exploration, and writing has a pleasant sense of discovery, but I always have a general direction to aim for, I’m not likely to paint myself into a corner, and I’m at little risk of an arc going nowhere because I didn’t have a plan.

This is what works for me. It might not be what works for you. I’d encourage every writer to experiment and find the balance that works for them. For some people, meticulous planning really is the best. For others, plans are anathema. There’s no objectively right or wrong answer, in my opinion. It’s a matter of what works best for each individual writer.

Review: The Tainted Realm: Rebellion

Among the many aspects of my life to disrupted by recent Real Life issues is my reading, but I have finally gotten around to picking up and finishing the second installment of Ian Irvine’s The Tainted Realm trilogy, Rebellion.

Fair warning: This review will contain spoilers for the first book of the series.

Cover art for "The Tainted Realm, book two: Rebellion" by Ian IrvineYou may recall my feelings on the previous book, Vengeance, were decidely mixed, despite my idolatry of Ian Irvine.

Certainly, it had a lot going for it: a strong cast of complex and compelling, if slightly cliche, characters; a detailed and imaginative setting; and no shortage of action, drama, and emotion.

But it was a grindingly dark book. Irvine’s always written very intense and brutal stories, and that’s part of what I respect about him, but balance is important in an epic story. What separates a good book from a great one is its ability to include little moments of positivity to break the monotony of the darker moments.

Vengeance didn’t have this. It was just and endless spree of tragedy, defeat, and mortal peril. There was never a chance to catch your breath as a reader. It somewhat marred what was otherwise an excellent book.

But Rebellion, I am glad to say, turns this around somewhat. It’s still a very dark and intense book, but it’s not entirely one-sided.

In true Ian Irvine fashion, the book begins with every character seemingly doomed. Tali has been abducted by the chancellor of Hightspall, who intends to milk her of her healing blood. Tobry has been forced to live his worst nightmare, becoming a monstrous were-cat creature, and has been consigned to death for it. Rix has been disgraced, crippled, and left for dead.

Meanwhile, Hightspall as a nation has been all but been crushed by the blitzkrieg assaults of the Cythonians.

The story hits the ground running, and rarely lets up. I’m always amazed by Ian Irvine’s ability to write massive, six hundred page epics and yet not waste a single word. Rebellion is a page-turner of the highest order, and it is every bit as intense as I’ve come to expect from Irvine.

But this time, there is some relief from the constant danger and heartache afflicting the characters. Little moments of peace and reflection are scattered throughout the book, giving the characters — and, by extension, the reader — a chance to recuperate. There aren’t a lot of these moments, but there are enough.

I also enjoyed the characters more this time. I’m not sure if it’s just because I’m used to them, or if their growth made them feel a little less cliched, or what, but they felt more real to me, and I enjoyed all of their stories.

In particular, I found Rix’s arc through this book very compelling. I wasn’t necessarily his biggest fan in the last book, but he stole the show this time around. I don’t want to spoil too much, but the events of Rebellion convinced me that he is a true hero, whatever he may think of himself.

A map of central Hightspall, the setting of Ian Irvine's "The Tainted Realm" trilogyThe strength of the characters is important, because — like Irvine’s other works — this isn’t really a battle of good versus evil. The Hightspallers and Cythonians both have righteous reasons for their actions, but both can be utterly cruel in pursuing their aims.

This means there aren’t any “good guys” to cheer for, but that doesn’t matter, because the individual characters provide someone to care about. I might wish both the Hightspallers and Cythonians would jump off a cliff, but I’m invested in Tali, Rix, and the others. I want them to succeed.

That’s not to say Rebellion is completely without flaws. I found the plot lacked flow in places, especially in the latter half. It seems to move too quickly and jump around in time a tad too much near the end, and it left me wondering if this series should have been a quartet rather than a trilogy.

He also didn’t seem to have much of a plan for Rannilt’s character this time around. She just sort of appears and disappears at random intervals while rarely contributing to the plot in any meaningful way, and the one new arc with her was largely abandoned early on. I suspect it’ll be addressed in the next book, but for now, it’s a distracting loose end.

Rannilt was one of my favourite characters in the first book, so this disappointed me.

Still, these are minor complaints. Rebellion is an excellent book on the whole, and it’s greatly improved my opinion of this series.

Overall rating: 9/10 This is the Ian Irvine I know and love.