Original Fiction: The Ghosts of Contests Past

It’s been a long time since I posted any of my fiction. Writing is a personal business, and it’s always hard to share it with the world. But this is supposed to be a blog about my writing, and not just my freelancing, either.

Recently, I was looking through the old writing contests held by myself and a few other writers over at TrekUnited.com before the site essentially died. I found a lot of my stories there that I’d forgotten even existed, and I wanted to give them new life. Some of them might not be very good, but it was interesting to stretch myself as a writer, if nothing else.

Don’t worry; they’re not Star Trek stories. The contests just happened to take place on a Trek site.

Each contest would have a prompt — either a word, phrase, or a picture — and I’ve included the prompt for each story.

All stories are © Tyler F.M. Edwards.

Enjoy!

The Fall:

Prompt: “Crumble into chaos” plus the following picture:

A photo used as the prompt for my story, "The Fall"The distant screams faded away as he headed deeper into the park. It was quiet here, peaceful. Everything was neat and orderly, arranged into a harmonious union of nature and civilization. It was late autumn, and the bright flowers, emerald leaves, and lush grass of summer had faded, but they had only given way to a starker kind of beauty.

He headed down the white stone paths, admiring the gentle clatter of barren branches in the wind, the subtle play of mist along the ground, and and the refreshingly cold air. The day was overcast and grim, but still beautiful. He tried to savor it all without wasting too much time. There was little time left to waste.

He came to a steep stone bridge over a tranquil canal. He walked to its top and looked out. From here, he could see the order of the park spread out before him and gain an impression of the city beyond. And of the fires outside it. Out beyond the city, the bleak but pure gray clouds gave way to churning red-black skies.

He could hear the screaming again. The forces of chaos were closing in.

His gaze again swept the park, and a single tear rolled down his cheek. All this would soon pass away. All things must end, and soon, all things would. The fight was nearly over. The enemy had won.

But there was still one act of defiance left to him.

He looked down at the mirror surface of the canal. The bridge’s reflection seemed to link up to the actual structure, forming a perfect ring. It gave the place an uncanny quality–but there was more to that than an unusual reflection. This bridge was located at the exact center of the park — in fact, the very center of the city, the last bit of land unclaimed by chaos — and that gave it power. But even before that, it had been a place of significance, of wild energy never fully tamed. That was why the city had been built around it.

Once, his people had been great, and he had been among the greatest of them. He extended his hands, calling on the last vestiges of that power. A thin bubble formed between his palms, and images flickered within it. Some were images of nature: trees, grass, the sunrise, the flow of stars across the night sky. Others were of people: a laugh, a quite moment between two lovers, a child at play. It contained an echo of everything that had once been good in the world.

He separated his hands, and the bubble slowly drifted down until it disappeared into the water of the canal. The forces of chaos were about to destroy the last unclaimed holdout of order, but the future would hold more than the utter desolation they sought. One day, long in the future, the seed he had planted would sprout, and the world would begin anew. It would not be the same as it had once been, but it would be good in its own way.

The last of the city’s defenses had now failed. Flames licked the trees at the edge of the park. The sky churned maddeningly. The terrified screams of his people were giving way to the frenzied cries of a thousand thousand fallen souls, the darkest parts of history dredged up to bring about its end, the forces of chaos.

As the last bastion of order crumbled into chaos, he felt himself do the same. He at last gave way to grief within him, turning it into a searing rage. He tore the fires from his enemies’ control, swirling them into a vast whirlwind above his head. And then, as they closed in, he unleashed their own power against them, his furious howls mingling with the roar of the flame.

The Tale of the Sentient Solstice:

Prompt: “Sentient solstice.”

Come close, my boy, and I will tell you the tale of the Sentient Solstice.

Those in the cities will tell you it’s a myth, an old superstition. But it’s all too real, my boy.

In everything, there dwells a soul. In you and I, yes, but also in the trees and the grass, the stone and the water. For most things, that soul lies dormant. But once every few years, when the days are longest or shortest, those souls waken, and things come alive.

Lock your doors and seal the shutters on the Sentient Solstice, my boy, for it is a perilous time. Do not walk in the woods, or your bones will hang from the branches. Do not walk upon the fields, or your flesh will fertilize them. Do not swim in the waters, or you will never see the surface again. Do not walk upon the roads, or the soil will swallow you whole.

Some say it is punishment for man’s crimes against nature. Some say the other souls are envious of the fact we never go dormant. But all who are wise agree that the only safe spot on the Sentient Solstice is barricaded within your home, where you are outside the reach of the trees’ grasping branches and the hungry earth.

So remember the Sentient Solstice, my boy, and beware, for on that day, all things come alive, and man has no sway.

Remember:

Prompt:

Art used as a prompt for my story, "Remember"He still remembered the war. He remembered the sting of shrapnel and the screams of his friends. He remembered the thunder of artillery, and he remembered death.

He remembered the funerals. He remembered the grave markers, row on row, before the church, and he remembered the weeping of friends and family. He remembered, too, when the war had spread, and this place had been abandoned. He remembered watching the church fall into disrepair, and the graves of his friends go untended.

Now, alone on this mountaintop, he remembered, but no one else did. He knew not if the war had ended or if it continued still, but years had passed, and no one, friend or foe, had come in all that time. He alone of all the people in the world still kept to this place and remembered the sacrifices of the past.

He could not rest. To do so would be to betray the memory of his fallen friends. And so he stayed by their side, as he had in life, through the cold mountain winters and the bright summers, through rain and sleet and the passage of time. Alone on the mountain, he kept his endless vigil, and he remembered.

The Monkey:

Prompt: A monkey wearing a beret.

I’m home now, but I used to do a lot of traveling. Had some of that — what do you call it? — wanderlust, I guess. Never could stay put. Always wanted to keep moving on.

I went all over the world. I’ve been to more weirdo hangouts and forgotten towns than I can even remember. I’ve seen things you can’t imagine in places you’ve never heard of.

The weirdest place of all was this little bar on the bad side of nowhere. It was around sunset, and I was hoping they could get me a drink and maybe tell me someplace I could stay for the night.

Right away, I could tell it was a strange place. When you’ve seen as many as I have, you kinda get a sense for it. The decorations were just a little too far to the left of normal; the cigarette smoke was just a little too thick. I shoulda turned around then, but I was tired.

I shuffled up to the bar, looking around. They had this big pool table covered in purple felt — I mean, really, everyone knows pool tables are supposed to be green — and the jukebox was playing what sounded like Elvis songs covered by a teenage Russian girl. Just strange, man.

The clientele were damn strange too, though I don’t remember much about most of ’em. A few had eye patches and other weird crap that made them look like cartoons. I remember they didn’t seem to like the look of me. Guess they didn’t get a lot of strangers around there. I can understand why.

I sat down at the bar and ordered a drink. They gave me something that I guess was supposed to be beer. I glanced over to my right, and I saw a monkey sitting at the end of the bar.

That’s right. A monkey.

He was old and shriveled up like a prune, and he was glaring at me like it was his stool I was sitting on. He was chompin’ this huge cigar, and he had a beret on.

Now just think about that for a minute. A monkey wearing a beret. Chomping a cigar and giving me the stink eye. Weirdest damn thing I ever saw.

Anyway, after that, I decided it was time to come home.

Original Fiction: “The Running Man”

So I thought it was about time to offer up some of my fiction–some of my real fiction, not some silly fan fic I threw together for a writing contest. I’m rather cagey about my writing, and this does not come easily to me, but I’m always complaining that no one reads my stuff, so I might as well put my money where my mouth is and offer up something to the teeming hordes of the interwebz.

“The Running Man” is a very short little story I wrote when I was tinkering with the concept for my last/current novel, “The Touch of the Saints”–a novel I have currently given up on due to lack of motivation but hope to return to someday. It establishes one of my central characters, as well as the magic system of this universe, which I believe to be one of those very rare semi-original ideas I trip across.

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The Running Man

© 2011 by Tyler F.M. Edwards.

“Tell me a story, grandmother,” Fayn said, huddling by the warmth of the fireplace.

Night had fallen, and all was quiet but for the crackle of the fire and the sound of Fayn’s parents cleaning up after dinner. Soon, the family would retire, but Fayn was still restless.

Her grandmother chuckled, leaning back in a rocking chair and almost invisible beneath her many blankets. “Have you heard the tale of the Running Man?”

“No, grandmother. Tell me.”

Her grandmother closed her eyes. “Long ago, after the fall of the Demons but before the age of peace we enjoy today, there was a small kingdom across the Wolf’s Mouth. It was not a great or mighty kingdom, but in it lived many men and women with strong and pure hearts.

“Though the Demons were gone, that was still a time of violence and peril, and the ruler of this kingdom dispatched many people to patrol its northern borders, on the edge of the Broken Lands, to keep watch over the wicked men and beasts that dwelt there.

“One day, one such man saw a dark shape on the horizon. A chill ran down his back, and he watched as it grew, and grew, and grew some more.”

Fayn shivered.

“Soon, it become revealed as a great army of brigands in black armor. Conquest was on their minds, and murder was in their hearts. And they were headed straight for the kingdom.

“And so the man ran. He ran down the hills of the Broken Lands and into the forests of the south in the hopes of bringing warning to his people. He ran until he could run no more, until his body ached and screamed. He ran until he had nothing left to give, and still he was miles away from his own people, and still the army of brigands marched.”

Her grandmother paused, and Fayn shifted anxiously.

“What happened then?” she asked. Her grandmother rarely told her sad stories, and she didn’t want this to be one of them.

A ghost of a smile touched her grandmother’s wrinkled face.

“He reached down inside himself, and he found the core of strength that is in all good men. He prayed to the Saints, and they blessed him with their fervor. And he ran on.”

Fayn grinned.

“He ran day and night without rest. He ran through shadowed woods and across bright plains. He ran until his shoes shredded, and the ground tore at his feet. But with the Saints’ blessing upon him and the purity of purpose in his heart, he persevered. His feet withstood the sharp pebbles and hard earth, and his body survived the exhaustion and deprivation.

“When a mountain blocked his path, he ran around, moving so fast he lost no time by the change in course. When a lake or a river stood in his way, the Saints blessed his feet with the lightness to run upon the water.

“He ran for ten days and ten nights and went to three of the kingdom’s border keeps. In each, he stayed only long enough to deliver his warning before moving to the next.

“Three full weeks after the Running Man had first glimpsed it, the brigand army entered the kingdom. When it did, they met an army of defenders, pure of heart and filled with the light of the Saints, brought fourth by the Running Man’s warnings. A terrible battle was fought, and both forces suffered terribly, but at the end of the day, the brigands were beat back, and the defenders of the kingdom stood triumphant.”

Her grandmother paused, and it seemed the story had ended.

“But what happened to the Running Man?” Fayn asked. The vivid images of her grandmother’s tale burned in her mind, and she wanted to know more.

At that moment, her father’s voice came from the other end of the family home, telling her to prepare for sleep.

“A tale for another time, my dear,” Fayn’s grandmother said.

Fayn frowned, disappointed, but moved to obey her father. But even as she went to bed, she remained restless, still excited by her grandmother’s story.

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The night was unusually cool for summer, and Fayn shivered as she crept through the darkness. She would be doing extra chores for a week if her parents realized she’d snuck out, but she was too restless to sleep, her grandmother’s tale still fresh in her mind.

She reached the pond at the edge of town. She took off her shoes and socks and stared at the glassy surface, steeling herself.

She knew that some people could do things that others couldn’t. Those with strong minds and the purity of the Saints in their hearts could go beyond the normal limitations of the human race. In less pious lands, they called it magic, she had been told. The Running Man must have been one of those people.

She closed her eyes and furrowed her brow, focusing with all her might. She said a prayer to the Saints, beseeching them for this one blessing.

And then she ran.

A moment later, she was in the water, coughing and spluttering. Water plunged down her nose and burned her throat, and she swallowed several mouthfuls before she started to swim.

There would be no hiding her outing from her parents now. She was soaked to the skin. But she had no regrets.

She looked back at the bank, and saw she was further into the pond than a simple leap could have brought her. And she knew that, for just a moment, she had been running on the water. Just as the Running Man had.

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